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    Blush Unsure of what i've done, can somebody check this "thing"?

    Hello everyone,
    Some days ago i asked how should i make a character, and i was adviced to start with edits; but with everything i do, i end up mess things up, and so i came to do this "thing", so i would like some advices on how it is and how should i proceed to make it better.

    http://orig06.deviantart.net/5c8a/f/...00-d9vsj6a.png

    for some reason it seems i can't upload the picture nor link the picture from deviantart, so forgive me for posting the link.

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    The chest looks really weird. Look up some other classic fighters from capcom and snk games and try to copy their look.
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    Good drawing!
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    @TheRealDio
    Thank you very much, yeah that is the problem for me too, but to be honest, all the character is a mass of copying other characters, the chest is a silhouette i drawn from ryu's chest, the shirt is something i drawn based on mr.karate edited shirt, hands are from kotaro fuuma, face is from kyosuke from rival schools, and legs and boots are from marco rossi of metal slug snk style; does any character with good exposed chest comes to your mind? I can't seem to find any that suits his body, sadly.

    @Wild Ram
    Thank you very much, i'm trying to learn more about pixelart, i will make him a character no matter what.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    @TheRealDio
    Thank you very much, yeah that is the problem for me too, but to be honest, all the character is a mass of copying other characters, the chest is a silhouette i drawn from ryu's chest, the shirt is something i drawn based on mr.karate edited shirt, hands are from kotaro fuuma, face is from kyosuke from rival schools, and legs and boots are from marco rossi of metal slug snk style; does any character with good exposed chest comes to your mind? I can't seem to find any that suits his body, sadly.
    Here's one.
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    @TheRealDio
    OH! Well....now i'm embarrassed.... i was so focused on Street fighter alpha i forgot everything about the 3....
    Thank you very much, will work right away on it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    @TheRealDio
    OH! Well....now i'm embarrassed.... i was so focused on Street fighter alpha i forgot everything about the 3....
    Thank you very much, will work right away on it.
    Good luck!
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    http://oi68.tinypic.com/29bys2f.jpg

    do you guys think this torso is better or it just went down the hill?

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    it looks better with the abs drawn in but the shape of the torso as a whole looks a bit off
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    http://oi65.tinypic.com/i58wop.jpg
    I kinda remade the back manually to fit in with the bent abs.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRealDio View Post
    I'm truly sorry i clicked dislike instead of thanks forgive me :\ i don't know how to correct it

    EDIT: sorry again for the mess, anyways thank you for your advices, i will work on them tomorrow as it is late here, also i made this for sketching a weak punch

    https://media.giphy.com/media/3o7WTs...4tKU/giphy.gif
    Last edited by Warbandit100; 21st March 2016 at 00:44. Reason: new info

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    I'm truly sorry i clicked dislike instead of thanks forgive me :\ i don't know how to correct it

    EDIT: sorry again for the mess, anyways thank you for your advices, i will work on them tomorrow as it is late here, also i made this for sketching a weak punch

    https://media.giphy.com/media/3o7WTs...4tKU/giphy.gif
    dont worry about.
    also im pretty sure we're around the same time.
    the weak punch animation looks okay, you could add a few more frames to make it look smoother.
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    http://oi68.tinypic.com/fxb3ba.jpg
    Done as you suggested, i'm still unsure about the pants.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    http://oi68.tinypic.com/fxb3ba.jpg
    Done as you suggested, i'm still unsure about the pants.
    that looks way better than what you started with.
    and yeah you can probably improve the leg on the left.
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    Made a weak punch as first animation, i've decided make the animations more complex as they get stronger, meaning the medium punch will move more of the character to hit.

    http://giphy.com/gifs/pixelart-3osxYorkbZqIzU6eMU

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    Default Re: Unsure of what i've done, can somebody check this "thing"?

    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    Made a weak punch as first animation, i've decided make the animations more complex as they get stronger, meaning the medium punch will move more of the character to hit.

    http://giphy.com/gifs/pixelart-3osxYorkbZqIzU6eMU
    looks sort of weird how he moves his whole body for a light punch.
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    I thought that too, should i make his body still as he give the punch then?
    http://giphy.com/gifs/pixelart-xThuWwvcXY4Cd1VvTa

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    Quote Originally Posted by Warbandit100 View Post
    I thought that too, should i make his body still as he give the punch then?
    http://giphy.com/gifs/pixelart-xThuWwvcXY4Cd1VvTa
    no the problem was that the whole body was moving in the same direction.
    Look at Ryu's LP animation from 3S for example.
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    Made him turn his torso and legs while moving slightly the other arm down, pants are still WIP.
    http://giphy.com/gifs/pixelart-3o7WTxNReiOTsPIhMc

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